Very exciting story! I find that the setting and the characters very creative...throughout the entire fiction it sounded like something out of a movie and yet the ideas are very original at the same time. Silieon was depicted as such a strong, tough, independent woman who carries this cold, hard exterior. But she was always seeing the bigger picture and has done everything for the greater good. However...đ Even then, I found the final interaction between her and her father surprising. The King, oddly enough, appeared to be very indecisive with his choices and is known to be a mind-changer...which is a vulnerability regarding his position. I wonder if more of this could be shown in future chapters. Anywho, great job!! I hope you carry on with this masterpiece!
Azshao
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