Review Detail of BookDevourer87 in The Wielder of Death Magic

I respect your opinion and what you like and don't like isn't in my control. However, I must call you out on the [Undeserving Comment] - that's a bit disrespectful don't you think? I'm not some hero who's going to tell you to differentiate between good and bad. I worked hard to become premium, that privilege didn't fall into my lap. That's my take on it; thanks for sticking by - I respect your opinion, in turn, you should respect the effort I put into writing. No necessarily the product, but the work behind it. >:)

Hello Mr. Author, i like to compare writing webnovels to doing sports. Until you reach a certain level of ability you are doing what you do, just because you love to do it and most of the times even have to pay a monthly fee to your sportsclub. At tournaments some people come and watch you, but they wouldn't pay for it. Nobody or at least very few people want to pay for some amateurs game... You have to work and train until you reach a level where people admire your ability and are ready to pay just to see you do sports. The same goes for writing imho. Your story is very confusing and your rating hasn't even reached above 3,5 stars, yet it is going premium. I have read and still am reading some novels with a rating ranging from 4,5 to 4,8 stars which went premium after about 160 to 190 chapters. Those works a brilliantly written and still these authors wanted to proof to their readers, that their work is deserving to be paid for before actually going premium. Your work is just not at that level just yet imho... This is not supposed to be a personal attack, but a subjective opinion from someone who has read dozens and dozens of novels over the years. I wish you the best of luck on your way to become a great writer and hopefully you will one day have an idea that becomes a fantastic story! Sincerely, BookDevourer87

You said about leveling up and becoming better to which I agree. My qualm isn't with that, I do it for fun. I didn't take it as a personal attack; I'm confident that my writing has improved. The chapters you read were when my stuff was in its infancy. From what I've read thanks comments and whatnot, the story gets better further down the line. Well it's all good, so don't worry about it, I just wished you had read more than few earlier chapters. [The novel goes premium after 200k words] Each chapter is about 2k words, plenty for anyone who doesn't want to pay to read. Have a good day and stay awesome :3 Also there are rumors that people delete reviews to look better, but they're baseless rumors and I'm not comparing myself to those talented individuals. I care not if this story becomes the lowest rated, I'll still write for the few people who liked it ;p