The idea is good. But I have little reservations about the quality of writing. But if that does not bother you then the novel is even good.
Frostysyrup
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LIKEHey question, could you please elaborate with the quality of writing thing? No excuse on my part if its badly written, but this is only the first draft - as I get better it will be fixed. Trust me, I learn fast. Sadly, my style of writing is a bit unorthodox in my humble opinion. It's not that bad you know, I've poured my heart out for all too see, and its with your help that I'll get better. Thanks for the review, I hope you stick around and point out my many mistakes ;p !
I’m not asking to change your writing style, but please edit it, i felt like i was reading a poem instead of an action book, just do third person pov completely, don’t make the mc talk like he’s in firs person pov
Frostysyrup:Hey question, could you please elaborate with the quality of writing thing? No excuse on my part if its badly written, but this is only the first draft - as I get better it will be fixed. Trust me, I learn fast. Sadly, my style of writing is a bit unorthodox in my humble opinion. It's not that bad you know, I've poured my heart out for all too see, and its with your help that I'll get better. Thanks for the review, I hope you stick around and point out my many mistakes ;p !
Nvm, i’ll just dropped it, i like the story but i cant get myself into it with your writing style, good luck tho
Frostysyrup:Hey question, could you please elaborate with the quality of writing thing? No excuse on my part if its badly written, but this is only the first draft - as I get better it will be fixed. Trust me, I learn fast. Sadly, my style of writing is a bit unorthodox in my humble opinion. It's not that bad you know, I've poured my heart out for all too see, and its with your help that I'll get better. Thanks for the review, I hope you stick around and point out my many mistakes ;p !
Ikkarus:Nvm, i’ll just dropped it, i like the story but i cant get myself into it with your writing style, good luck tho
This is not about the quality of the grammar itself but about something else. It's hard to explain, but when I read something, there are differences even if you can't see them. You can feel it . It's like this novel is very good but not perfect. But I like it and I will follow the development because you have the potential as an author.
Frostysyrup:Hey question, could you please elaborate with the quality of writing thing? No excuse on my part if its badly written, but this is only the first draft - as I get better it will be fixed. Trust me, I learn fast. Sadly, my style of writing is a bit unorthodox in my humble opinion. It's not that bad you know, I've poured my heart out for all too see, and its with your help that I'll get better. Thanks for the review, I hope you stick around and point out my many mistakes ;p !
This is not about the quality of the grammar itself but about something else. It's hard to explain, but when I read something, there are differences even if you can't see them. You can feel it . It's like this novel is very good but not perfect. But I like it and I will follow the development because you have the potential as an author.
Frostysyrup:Hey question, could you please elaborate with the quality of writing thing? No excuse on my part if its badly written, but this is only the first draft - as I get better it will be fixed. Trust me, I learn fast. Sadly, my style of writing is a bit unorthodox in my humble opinion. It's not that bad you know, I've poured my heart out for all too see, and its with your help that I'll get better. Thanks for the review, I hope you stick around and point out my many mistakes ;p !
Kojot:This is not about the quality of the grammar itself but about something else. It's hard to explain, but when I read something, there are differences even if you can't see them. You can feel it . It's like this novel is very good but not perfect. But I like it and I will follow the development because you have the potential as an author.
Maybe that's it. But I believe in you as an author the more that you respond to comments. To be able to write as the authors of these novels, you need experience and help from an editor (by the way, do you have one?), And this is about experience. I believe in you .
Frostysyrup:The flow ? Maybe, I dunno but thanks for believing in me. I'll get better I promise :p
No editor - I'm solo at the moment. Maybe in the future but I don't see it becoming plausible anytime soon :p
Kojot:Maybe that's it. But I believe in you as an author the more that you respond to comments. To be able to write as the authors of these novels, you need experience and help from an editor (by the way, do you have one?), And this is about experience. I believe in you .
Kojot:Maybe that's it. But I believe in you as an author the more that you respond to comments. To be able to write as the authors of these novels, you need experience and help from an editor (by the way, do you have one?), And this is about experience. I believe in you .