Review Detail of Rooz in A Bend in Time

A good read overall. It is really close to what I would consider a great fanfic, which makes its problems really frustrating. Writing quality is good, but misspells are common and sometimes the choice of words is very weird (Werewolfism instead of lycanthropy for example) Character design is absolutely fantastic... except the mc. Noticable (but bearable) marysueiness aside, her decisions often contradict her character or even her thoughts. She may know that making a certain decision is a bad idea and have a pretty good plan on what to do instead, only to disregard it entirely and make that bad decision anyway. World building in general is disappointing. Although the original content is pretty solid, plot often mirrors the books even when it is very out of place. I've still read 400+ chapters in a week. It's an interesting read, I'm just sad it's not perfect despite being frustratingly close.