Item: Akame Ga Kill: Garou (DROPPED)
Rating: 4
Author: General_Paragon

General_ParagonLv55yr

2019-08-15 17:27

Bad grammar, but I saw worse, the idea was good, I will review again in future, the story had a good beginning. ...............................

Akame Ga Kill: Garou (DROPPED)

Milk_Is_My_Drug

4.4

1 Chs

Liked by 2 people

Replies4

SexyBeastLv13

Your calling him out for bad grammar but your sentences aren’t even proper grammar. “But I saw worse” should’ve been “ But I’ve seen worse “ or even your incorrect use of commas but yet you tried calling out the author for his grammar.😑😑😑

5yr

General_ParagonLv5

I'm doing my job as a reader, this isn't my story, it's his. I know that i also have a bad grammar, but this isn't my fanfic to begin with

SexyBeast:Your calling him out for bad grammar but your sentences aren’t even proper grammar. “But I saw worse” should’ve been “ But I’ve seen worse “ or even your incorrect use of commas but yet you tried calling out the author for his grammar.😑😑😑

5yr

General_ParagonLv5

I'm doing my job as a reader, this isn't my story, it's his. I know that i also have a bad grammar, but this isn't my fanfic to begin with

5yr

WebzayneLv11

Try reading his novels, omgealul. It's nothing but a farce for him to try and criticize other's when he refuses to improve his own writing. If you can call it that...

5yr

Other Reviews

TrollfaceLv1

Honestly, I was disappointed. this work is similar to Chinese consumer goods + the synopsis does not fit the plot at all. garou eventually did not become any hero, did not learn anything, but only turned into a Chinese version of himself. a pathetic parody of the original.👎👎👎👎 Имхо

3yr

EsorilLv5

The idea is good and the plot is fine. Even better that you could depict the personality of garou pretty accurately... Hope you could keep writing the story. 👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👍👍👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👌👍👌👍👍👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍☝️👍☝️👌👍✌️✊👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👆👍👆👍👆👍👆👍👆👍👆👍👆👍👆👍👆👍👆👍

5yr

batnias_sundardLv3

Is nice to see you back, this novel have potencial and with your unice touch im sure that you can make a novel, i think that all that read your work will like it.

5yr

zangeras999Lv5

A good choice of the main character. I just want to remind you that Garou called himself a monster of people and did not kill. I hope this is not a fan fiction. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊

5yr

MytawLv5

Shi*tty Grammar is horrible Doesn't follow Garou's personality and looks like the author just watched the fight scenes tl;dr A waste of time

5yr

XumitLv13

It's a good read. Mc isn't a hypocrite who kills everyone for justice. I like anti hero mc. They are more realistic than those mc who wants to be a saint.

5yr

ClearSkySageLv4

Reveal spoiler

5yr

Random_Dude_9811Lv3

Oi what the why did you delete the chapters? Restore will you why did you even do that?

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GamerulLv2

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