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SEVEN
SEVENLv45yr
2019-08-21 10:12

The flow in the story were very realistic. One will definitely can relate much from this. First POV's really is the best in my opinion and you brought it out here in WN. Thanks for making this story. I really enjoyed it much. You should change the apostrophe (') of the dialogue into the quotation marks (") :) It is a standard way of conversation. However, I really enjoyed reading this story. I hope you release more chapters in the near future. Great job, Author!

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Tea_TaeAuthor

Ahh the apostrophe. Lol. British styled writers use single ones 馃槄 Even my Harry Potter books have single apostrophes so I follow that style

Tea_Tae
Tea_TaeAuthor

And thank you for the love 鉂わ笍鉂わ笍 do let me know whom you ship our FL wihh 馃槝

SEVEN
SEVENLv4

Woah, I actually didn't know that, hahaha. Welp. Good story! But since it was from first POV's it very much understandable! I don't have Harry Potter books. This lowly one is poor 馃槀馃槀

Tea_Tae:Ahh the apostrophe. Lol. British styled writers use single ones 馃槄 Even my Harry Potter books have single apostrophes so I follow that style
Tea_Tae
Tea_TaeAuthor

I read them off free pdf's. I only own the last book

SEVEN:Woah, I actually didn't know that, hahaha. Welp. Good story! But since it was from first POV's it very much understandable! I don't have Harry Potter books. This lowly one is poor 馃槀馃槀
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