The flow in the story were very realistic. One will definitely can relate much from this. First POV's really is the best in my opinion and you brought it out here in WN. Thanks for making this story. I really enjoyed it much. You should change the apostrophe (') of the dialogue into the quotation marks (") :) It is a standard way of conversation. However, I really enjoyed reading this story. I hope you release more chapters in the near future. Great job, Author!
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LIKEWoah, I actually didn't know that, hahaha. Welp. Good story! But since it was from first POV's it very much understandable! I don't have Harry Potter books. This lowly one is poor 馃槀馃槀
Tea_Tae:Ahh the apostrophe. Lol. British styled writers use single ones 馃槄 Even my Harry Potter books have single apostrophes so I follow that style