It's a bit confusing to be honest if your reading to fast you can get alittle confused. But I love how the story is going. But how can he not realize the person he has been looking for is right in front of him.
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LIKEScarlet_Shine:I hope I never disappoint your expectations. I have started a new work that's been registered to the ongoing contest. The title is "Mama's Princess is Daddy's Beloved " It would be great if I could know my reader's thoughts on that novel too. If you have time please check it out!! 😇