Everything is fine from the writing style to the story itself except that it, it’s BORING. Sorry author and readers who likes/love this but it is. I read 20 chapters straight and skipped the others until to the latest and there is still no development so far. If others will defend this because they are still children, that’s not an excuse. Many online stories started from children to *****hood that have more story than this one that feels like a dull diary. Author I hope you develop more because I know you can. Thanks for the story but I’m out.
LunarFlakes
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