Review Detail of MadQueen1 in The Wretched Mistress
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I really loved the plot at the beginning and found it original. I was very excited to read the story but then I was disappointed. Please don't be offended but this is just my honest review. I mean, I've read countless stories in Wattpad in which the author mostly focuses on the fight over the ML between the ***** of the story and the FL and that just becames the main plot. The ***** would just do cruel thinks over stupid reasons and the FL would be the damsel in distress and ofc the prince charming ML who's 'powerful', would TRY to protect his love but fails against simple cruel plans eventhough he's "powerful". I said I liked the original plot (the one in the description) 'cauze I thought there would be a character development of both the ML amd FL ( he with the matters of his mariage and she with her instability and struggles. And also more focused on how he would fall in love with her and she accepts to have a relationship. I also really felt that it was rushed. I mean at first, it was said that he never was in love with her or ever had any affections towards her, he was so in love with his wife and she's complicated it wouldn't be easy to just accept such kind of relationship in such a short time; maybe sex but not love. Well, I just wanted to justify why I would drop this story bit wish you luck and all the best with the writing!
The Wretched Mistress
ElleJaye
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Remember that the summary is about April's POV. we are still in the early stages of the story. In time she would think differently, she would encounter countless problems that the official wife throws at her. This might be a spoiler but just to let everyone know that it is going to be like what I said in the summary. Later, she would think that Alex doesn't really love her. Depression does that to you. Especially if you're constantly being pressured. Still, sorry to disappoint you. Thanks for dropping by đ
Remember that the summary is about April's POV. we are still in the early stages of the story. In time she would think differently, she would encounter countless problems that the official wife throws at her. This might be a spoiler but just to let everyone know that it is going to be like what I said in the summary. Later, she would think that Alex doesn't really love her. Depression does that to you. Especially if you're constantly being pressured. Still, sorry to disappoint you. Thanks for dropping by đ
Plz give me a spoiler cuz i got irritated easily, the novels where the ML doesnât love the FL and even cheated her but what I understand from the synopsis he love his wife and cheated her with FL and even have a sun with FL So the wife will bring troubles to FL I hate when there is a cheating and more like he donât love Fl and the worst part she is suffering emotionally Plz give me a spoiler so if i would read it with peace mind if i like whats gonna happen later
ElleJaye:Remember that the summary is about April's POV. we are still in the early stages of the story. In time she would think differently, she would encounter countless problems that the official wife throws at her. This might be a spoiler but just to let everyone know that it is going to be like what I said in the summary. Later, she would think that Alex doesn't really love her. Depression does that to you. Especially if you're constantly being pressured. Still, sorry to disappoint you. Thanks for dropping by đ