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MadQueen1
MadQueen1Lv105yr
2019-10-24 13:25

I really loved the plot at the beginning and found it original. I was very excited to read the story but then I was disappointed. Please don't be offended but this is just my honest review. I mean, I've read countless stories in Wattpad in which the author mostly focuses on the fight over the ML between the ***** of the story and the FL and that just becames the main plot. The ***** would just do cruel thinks over stupid reasons and the FL would be the damsel in distress and ofc the prince charming ML who's 'powerful', would TRY to protect his love but fails against simple cruel plans eventhough he's "powerful". I said I liked the original plot (the one in the description) 'cauze I thought there would be a character development of both the ML amd FL ( he with the matters of his mariage and she with her instability and struggles. And also more focused on how he would fall in love with her and she accepts to have a relationship. I also really felt that it was rushed. I mean at first, it was said that he never was in love with her or ever had any affections towards her, he was so in love with his wife and she's complicated it wouldn't be easy to just accept such kind of relationship in such a short time; maybe sex but not love. Well, I just wanted to justify why I would drop this story bit wish you luck and all the best with the writing!

The Wretched Mistress

ElleJaye
4.4
132 Chs

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ElleJaye
ElleJayeAuthor

Remember that the summary is about April's POV. we are still in the early stages of the story. In time she would think differently, she would encounter countless problems that the official wife throws at her. This might be a spoiler but just to let everyone know that it is going to be like what I said in the summary. Later, she would think that Alex doesn't really love her. Depression does that to you. Especially if you're constantly being pressured. Still, sorry to disappoint you. Thanks for dropping by 😊

5yr
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ElleJaye
ElleJayeAuthor

Remember that the summary is about April's POV. we are still in the early stages of the story. In time she would think differently, she would encounter countless problems that the official wife throws at her. This might be a spoiler but just to let everyone know that it is going to be like what I said in the summary. Later, she would think that Alex doesn't really love her. Depression does that to you. Especially if you're constantly being pressured. Still, sorry to disappoint you. Thanks for dropping by 😊

5yr
MadQueen1
MadQueen1Lv10

ThankS for replying ! Well finally I think I'm gonna continue the story knowing that it wouldn't be just about the wife being cruel

5yr
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MeMo
MeMoLv10

Plz give me a spoiler cuz i got irritated easily, the novels where the ML doesn’t love the FL and even cheated her but what I understand from the synopsis he love his wife and cheated her with FL and even have a sun with FL So the wife will bring troubles to FL I hate when there is a cheating and more like he don’t love Fl and the worst part she is suffering emotionally Plz give me a spoiler so if i would read it with peace mind if i like whats gonna happen later

ElleJaye:Remember that the summary is about April's POV. we are still in the early stages of the story. In time she would think differently, she would encounter countless problems that the official wife throws at her. This might be a spoiler but just to let everyone know that it is going to be like what I said in the summary. Later, she would think that Alex doesn't really love her. Depression does that to you. Especially if you're constantly being pressured. Still, sorry to disappoint you. Thanks for dropping by 😊
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I just read this story just up to like 30 chapters and am not happy about the story... The reason y I gave it all 5 stars is so the author could see this story and know it's really very wrong... I know it may attract people to disagree with it but I gat to say it.... With the little chapter I read ... A lot of things are wrong.. 1. Y did the ML cheat Because his wife is not giving him attention... Seriously can someone tell me if it a good enough reason.. In reality when u get married.. U take a vow For better for worse Sickness and in health... If u know u will not love till u go breathless y marry her in the first place.. seriously... Y... U hurt her and u say u moved on because someone give u attention... What of if he is been deicived by a white lotes bi**h ... Author y Seriously y U know in place were men are in the apex of piramide women are nothing.... I sweet am really dropping this book.... It's not worth it.... The male lead did a lot of wrong First he didn't tell his wife to be that he had sex before his wedding and the marriage is ganna start with the ML keeping secrets.... Some one explain... If Ur in the ML WIFE shoe's how will u fill For guys and for girls..... I don't support what the ML and the surpossed FL to do wat they did to her..... .... If there is a way for me to block this book for me to ever not see it again... Someone tell me... Cuz All I believe is He should have divorced before he got together or slept with anyone... Am imagining what if she had a problem with her womb after marriage Will the male lead go around Fu*king another for a child Seriously....😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡so angry

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