Review Detail of Ryocor in Star Wars: Wrath of The Force
Review detail
All in all a great Story. I love the Idea of mixing SWTOR and the old movies. And here it is done really well and careful, too. World and Character descriptions are done nicely. The Story follows the Movies pretty closely only skipping the parts you don‘t really need to know (for example the Pod Race of Anakin or the conversation between Maul and Palpatine). First I was a bit doubtful about the characters that were picked from SWTOR fearing it would only be some Harem-fest, but so far it was really good. I love the amount of force and light saber users that were picked, so I couldn‘t be sad that other characters didn‘t get picked. Anyway. Back to the important bits. The Characters are well written and I couldn’t find moments, which you can find in so many novels, were the conversations and actions of some characters just makes you cringe. Which is like the biggest turn off in most novels in my eyes at least. The update speed is always a point of discussion. I personally know how hard it can be to write you own story/fan-fic. But from what I can get the author really does a lot of research and writes a ton for a single release as well. So there really shouldn’t be any people stressing about updates. As long as the quality stays as good as it is I’m fine with that. To the author: Keep up the good work. Atm your novel is the only one I read. I like how you set up your MC so I hope that you don’t go into any Dark Dark or Light Light direction with him. 😄
Star Wars: Wrath of The Force
Zevren
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Hey, thanks for the Review! Yeah I looked at same scenes from the original movie and had to skip some of them, or cut them short. Would have been too long. About the harem elements, I didn't want them to be a focus, I mean I have them there, but yeah. About conversations, I honestly am not too good at writing conversations. I trying to work on it, so thanks for the compliment. About the characters I picked, honestly I just wasn't too familiar with the other characters in the game, I also found most of the males to be boring, like andronikus and Quinn. The ones i have included I also had to have reasons for why they would be traveling with MC. Other than that I didn't want a too big main cast from the past, because the personal star ship can only fit so many people. Anyway, thanks for the Review, love seeing them! Zevren out.
I get your problem with writing Conversations, that's my worst point when writing, too. As far as male characters go I totally understand, there are few written as exciting as the female characters. Anyway keep it up :D Make sure to not release as slow as me, I don't believe I could deal with that :D :D :D
Zevren:Hey, thanks for the Review! Yeah I looked at same scenes from the original movie and had to skip some of them, or cut them short. Would have been too long. About the harem elements, I didn't want them to be a focus, I mean I have them there, but yeah. About conversations, I honestly am not too good at writing conversations. I trying to work on it, so thanks for the compliment. About the characters I picked, honestly I just wasn't too familiar with the other characters in the game, I also found most of the males to be boring, like andronikus and Quinn. The ones i have included I also had to have reasons for why they would be traveling with MC. Other than that I didn't want a too big main cast from the past, because the personal star ship can only fit so many people. Anyway, thanks for the Review, love seeing them! Zevren out.