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Review Detail of BasiliskFang in Absolute Stealing

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The idea's good but the story pales when it comes to execution. The chapter's are small and the grammar needs an overhaul. There are a lot of O.C.s (Original Characters) and characters lack depth. I recommend the author to scrap this version of the story, then get a beta reader or editor and post it as a brand new fanfiction. Increase of word length and complexity along with a steady update schedule is the key to attracting more readers while keeping the existing reader base hungry for more. Till then, I'm going to stop reading this fanfiction. I hope that the author will consider my views. Yours sincerely, BasiliskFang.

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Absolute Stealing

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