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2 is a stretch to me. The direction of the story's quality saved it from being a 1. The grammar and writing quality butchered the novel. The novel had a good story with the laws and mc's character, but again the writing quality completely butchered the story. I am not expecting professional but it's worse than machine translations. You will need to reread and hope you understood it right to not be confused. (Some titles, names, and numbers are not consistent) and got switched which threw me off. Some facts are like copy and paste. Even more the novel was like random words to make the certain word count. The novel had potential but the writing quality discouraged me from continuing reading

The Law God - Artic

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I know , this was my first time trying writing a novel in other language than my native language , so I am going to pay some kind of "pro-editor" to edit this novel completely.