Review Detail of Loyalscum in The Law God - Artic

I have read 70 chapters and i do think tyis story has potential it was just written by sime one who sucks at the most basic parts of writing. If the author bothered to go back and correct his many obvious mistakes and stoped deleting peoples post because they leave a bad review then this could be on par with some great novels like world of worlocks. Some things he does wrong is: 1. The way he writes makes me think English is is not his first language. Which is not the problem the problem is he writes so 1 dimensionaly , MC is an ideot that flip flops me then a fish out of water. Dies because of wrandom woman .Promises to live for himself no others. Transports to another world . Gains powers at a stupidly fast wrate .Bumps into wrandom whore gives out precious knouledge about fire for free. Now ***** is never mentioned again. 2. There is no structure he pretends to be careful but, he is as arigent as they come. Does not do basic reserch about brand new world. Ok about killing human for no reson after 1 command from the principal at a school. Should have 0 fighting experience but Does not matter cuz he 1 shot everyone. No one has escape ability despite the people he is fighting are hundreds of years old. 3. Super easy to become a god he does not need to train meditate , explore , get good equipment. Demi god stronger then mid god him. His chess philosophy is super lame i liked his old powers better. 4. Gods who have lived hundreds and thousand of years are stupid like pre-pubeant ****. When he is on adventure because he is at mid god leven and arthur is only now how there is no one else in story to give an F about he ads more 1 dimensional mid god beings who tell u ****ty background ove campfire. Insted of being mysterious and all incompassing instead of acting like a lvl 10 adventure group. There are many problems this is just the tip of them i just hope Arthur fixs them so story can actually be good.