Review Detail of Kastelan in The Law God - Artic

A very interesting concept and overall fun/unique idea but the story feels a bit rushed to the point that what should have been a 30 chapter arc is finished in 2 chapters leaving the reader having trouble feeling attached to any passing characters or place the mc is surrounded by at the time. Unfortunately the writing is very inconsistent and erratic for the most part as well on top of a lot of grammatic errors. I feel as a first draft this has promise but needs to be restarted and thoroughly planned out along with a good editor. But as of it's current condition I can't keep reading the story. Best of luck to the author and editor.