Review Detail of sergioGM in The Law God - Artic

Item: The Law God - Artic
Rating: 2.8

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sergioGMLv64yrsergioGM

I have to drop this story. I tried, but the writing is among the worst I have ever seen. You don't read what you write, because first an ability is called X and in the next paragraph is called Y. Many of the characters are genderless, because you use he and she for the same person. If you rewrite this story with the help of an editor I think it can be a good story.

The Law God - Artic

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Author_BeratLv1Author_Berat

I am sure the author said the chapters slowly updated. He found an a editor

4yr

David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

There is no substance to this story. The MC does one thing sticks to it for 2 chapters and then he goes level up his god hood, before moving on to completely different thing. Leaving character development behind. Also I hate the power system in this story as its one of the worst I've seen. No one should become a god with just brief descriptions on topics. Its like some guy becomes a god of rocks because he can tell that this rock is harder than that rock. Pretty sure anyone could become a god judging from how the MC can make a turtle law based off its life cycle.

4yr