While I did somewhat enjoy reading this story, I felt I was reading a sexually charged story written by a young teenager. The character development was poor and the story developed so fast, it caused wiplash. While it was humurous at times, it was beyond unrealistic. It has a lot of potential for improvement though. I don’t know. I am left wondering what I just read and wondering why I bothered finishing this.
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