Review Detail of Frosty1202 in Overlord Phantom

Although this is my first novel ever written on here, I believe I have outdone myself so far. Its definitely nowhere near the best; however, it has gone farther than I expected it to be. I still have plenty of ideas and many more chapters to come! If you’d like to tell me something that I can improve on in future chapters, please let me know by leaving a review below! Thanks!