Review Detail of da_tian in The Strongest Lucky Draw System
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The story needs an editor. I couldn't understand what the h*** was going on in the first chapter. Like when he woke up and touch something soft I thought he was gay cause he kept calling the girl a he.
The Strongest Lucky Draw System
KieraRz
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da_tianLv13da_tian
You can still get an editor to fix the errors and make the story flow, otherwise you are just wasting your time translating a story. You have two choices when you translate a story either do it so the people who read it can understand it and feel the proper tone from the story, or you can do this and fake like you are actually doing a good job translating this without putting in any effort just to produce ineligible story.
KieraRz:This is a machine translation
