Review Detail of lusty_maidzz21 in Dark Crow Rising
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Not a bad novel it has good grammar, characters, and world background (as far as I'm concerned). But I find it difficult to read not sure why just do. Good in all aspects, just slow ig?
Dark Crow Rising
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I think I have an idea as to why you find it difficult to read, others have mentioned similar things on other sites. Am working on it, of course, but, sometimes, the drive to carry on making the road is more enticing than filling in the plot holes. So I am sorry for any mistakes, but, thank you for the feedback. And, that's fair, I do find myself sometimes just wanting to do a slow burner where the characters just talk or do something. Again, thank you.
Honestly, I didn't see any real problems with the polt unless I tried to criticize it. I would say the whole main issue with the novel (my personal opinion) is that the chapters are too long, if you could "dumb" it down and shorten each of the chapters or make one chapter into multiple. But this really is my own opinion bc some people like long chapters. You do good work so don't worry about it. Just keep doing what works for you!
Errrwin:I think I have an idea as to why you find it difficult to read, others have mentioned similar things on other sites. Am working on it, of course, but, sometimes, the drive to carry on making the road is more enticing than filling in the plot holes. So I am sorry for any mistakes, but, thank you for the feedback. And, that's fair, I do find myself sometimes just wanting to do a slow burner where the characters just talk or do something. Again, thank you.