Review Detail of FallenButterfly in The CEO's Wife has a Secret

Hi! Shamelessly reviewing my own story here. I will give an honest review of my own story as well as personal interests why I liked it. Writing quality? I'm not so sure with this myself, I'm more of into straight facts writing and I'm new to creative writing. I don't know. Grammar-wise, I have to be honest, my grammar really needs improvement. I know this myself, even widening my vocabulary is a must. Everyone can notice that I don;t have stability when it comes to updating, I'm still on the process of getting the hang of it so I want to apologize. In the future, I will work harder to stock pile chapters. I felt like the story was progressing slow? This is my point-of-view as a reader by the way. Though I don't plan to stay that way, I don't want to put a lot of unnecessary chapters/events. I want everything to matter in the end. Not that I'm opposed to meek and shy FL , I quite like them actually but for this particular plot I want to have a strong and independent FL . One that will not be overshadowed by the ML. This is also a personal reason for me, because I believe women should be like Xi Ana. Strong and can stand on her own. I'm not gonna delve on the world background as I believe we have different perceptions of that. Please do support my story! Leave comments and reviews, I will surely reflect on them. You can also ask questions, I will answer them to the best of abilities. Thank you!