Review Detail of mr_popo in Treasures of Heaven and Earth
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Not enough reviews for a rating... so i'll rate. Writing quality: No mistakes seen so far. The use of ancient chinese in the story throws me off at times simply because i forget and too lazy to check the aux chap. (Author has explained the meanings in a chap) Updates: The updates are stable. It's just not updated enough if you ask me. I want more but i don't want the quality to drop because of it. So i'll be content. Story: There is a lot of development and early on it might have been a bit annoying. (Cliffhanger on ML and the next week the chap is about FL so 2 weeks before we get back to ML) I hope that at the latest chap (of the time of this review) There wil not be too many shifts again. Char: They are well enough designed and interesting. Background: Everything is good.
Treasures of Heaven and Earth
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Just to be clear about the POV switches, i do not mind it if it doesn't end on a cliff. So personally i prefer if there is a cliff on a lead then keep the next chap about that lead untill a part is cleared. (lets say ML is in a fight for a chap and some big attack is thrown and chap ends. Then don't go to the FL the next chap.) Of course this is simply my opinion and i do not have patience.
Thanks for the Review. I to wish I could update faster, but I found that when I used to do daily chapters, they were shorter and of lower quality. I also found myself spending time writing that needed to be allocated elsewhere e.g. work So now I am restricting myself to one chapter released a week to avoid getting into that situation again.