Review Detail of Alexandre_Quissang in Lightning Sage(dropped)

I was trying to keep reading but I can't. This fanfiction has been done without much thought, many mistakes like. 1-The way that the sharingan awoke is wrong, he never knew the Father, he has no emotional attachment and just because the Mother told him the story of his possible death he suddenly has enough anguish to awaken the sharingan. 2-How they got back to konoha the way they got this VERY WRONG, FOR GOD'S LOVE, KONOHA IS A SHINOBI VILLAGE AND THEY ARE PARANOIC THE FIRST THING THAT HAPPENS IS THAT THEY MUST BE TAKEN TO THE HOKAGE FOR INTERROGATORY, EVEN MORE AFTER DEATH DO FOURTH HOKAGE. 3- The return to the Uchiha is disappointing, the MC took the name of the father not Uchiha automatically the elders of the clan would take their eyes and exchange for normal ones, even if they are cousins ​​of the patriarch of the clan that does not change. 3.1- If Mc had adopted the name Uchiha he and his mother would be isolated from the Uchihas like Izumi and his Mother Now where I couldn't take it and droped chapter 13. 4-One of the biggest mistakes JARAYA WASN'T IN KONOHA SINCE HE learned of MINATO'S DEATH, UNTIL NARUTO CHUNNINS EXAMS WHERE THE THIRD HOKAGE CALLED HIM BECAUSE OF ORICHIMARU'S MOVEMENTS. 4.1-And if he were in konoha he would not be looking for a new disciple while his godson is undergoing horrible treatments, to have to take care of an uchiha brat, in which the clan are suspected of killing his disciple. To say. I liked the premise of the story but the author has no knowledge of the world and the characters to better develop his story, the characters they look like machines there’s no feeling they don’t have personality but I don’t care, I was just frustrated by that 4 points.