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RandomIsGood
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Would have been a good story but the MC personality and just his sheer stupidity is too much for me. I mean he knows about general stuff in novels so why is he so dumb

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I Don't Want To Defy The Heavens

Xin Feng

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Jack_Balu
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I found a book its named Story of legends i recommend it book was amazing you should check it out

Rlopdsr12
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i found a novel named Wasurerarenai bōken and theres also Story Of Legends those books are great

Sakusei
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Hmm... As you may know some authors do like character development, and by character development I mean making a stupid and worthless person become a person that will do something like save the world, have a brain like a normal person(If he doesn't know anything why would he be cautious?)

RandomIsGood
RandomIsGoodLv5RandomIsGood

Your reasons are valid but does not apply to the mc in this story as he knows general novel knowledge and isn't ignorant so he is indeed stupid and a dumbass as he has the info to know not to do something yet still does it

Sakusei:Hmm... As you may know some authors do like character development, and by character development I mean making a stupid and worthless person become a person that will do something like save the world, have a brain like a normal person(If he doesn't know anything why would he be cautious?)
Sakusei
SakuseiLv4Sakusei

He does it for the sake of rage points, for he knows that only his father can give him large amounts of rage points. It's at the part of the novel when he has to leave the city and go to somewhere else, where his personality will gradually change to something better than the first parts. Something happens in that part which makes him want to focus on cultivation, that makes him want to be stronger. Well you see, his character development is slow and steady, or rather really slow

RandomIsGood:Your reasons are valid but does not apply to the mc in this story as he knows general novel knowledge and isn't ignorant so he is indeed stupid and a dumbass as he has the info to know not to do something yet still does it
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It was so hard reading your one-sentence paragraph. Can you please add some punctuation at least? You have the info... Why don't you use it?

RandomIsGood:Your reasons are valid but does not apply to the mc in this story as he knows general novel knowledge and isn't ignorant so he is indeed stupid and a dumbass as he has the info to know not to do something yet still does it
Sakusei
SakuseiLv4Sakusei

Also he doesn't care about the people in those families, he knows that they're afraid of his father

RandomIsGood:Your reasons are valid but does not apply to the mc in this story as he knows general novel knowledge and isn't ignorant so he is indeed stupid and a dumbass as he has the info to know not to do something yet still does it
RandomIsGood
RandomIsGoodLv5RandomIsGood

Oh I thought this was the other idiot mc story that I had reviewed but it was this one but I don't even read this so whatever you say to me is pointless

Sakusei:He does it for the sake of rage points, for he knows that only his father can give him large amounts of rage points. It's at the part of the novel when he has to leave the city and go to somewhere else, where his personality will gradually change to something better than the first parts. Something happens in that part which makes him want to focus on cultivation, that makes him want to be stronger. Well you see, his character development is slow and steady, or rather really slow
Sakusei
SakuseiLv4Sakusei

Oh then what's this review for?

RandomIsGood:Oh I thought this was the other idiot mc story that I had reviewed but it was this one but I don't even read this so whatever you say to me is pointless
RandomIsGood
RandomIsGoodLv5RandomIsGood

No I'm lazy to add punctuation and wdym I have the info I didn't say I had any info

It was so hard reading your one-sentence paragraph. Can you please add some punctuation at least? You have the info... Why don't you use it?
RandomIsGood
RandomIsGoodLv5RandomIsGood

For this story duh

Sakusei:Oh then what's this review for?
RandomIsGood
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But I have reviewed alot of story's with dumbass mc so I got them mixed up when a review 6 months old was commented on like what makes you think that's a good idea

Sakusei:Oh then what's this review for?
Sakusei
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Oh u mean ur reply earlier, ok. Still though try reading it past 200+ chaps that's when the real story starts, the first chaps below 199 are there so he can have connections with people from different status(Such as a gang leader that acts evil, but is actually trying to nurture a monster so he can protect something... And a person that acts like he wants to revolt every 20 years, but is actually trying to cover up hidden info). There's a lot.

RandomIsGood:But I have reviewed alot of story's with dumbass mc so I got them mixed up when a review 6 months old was commented on like what makes you think that's a good idea
Sakusei
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Also what I mean by connections I mean bad connections, but with that gang leader he has a really good connection with him cuz of what he said to the gang leader in a certain chap where he looks younger than he was supposed to be.

RandomIsGood
RandomIsGoodLv5RandomIsGood

No **** that if a story aint able to make me want to read it in under 15k words/ten chapters I'm leaving. 200 are u insane that's so much just to get into the story wtf like no no no

Sakusei:Oh u mean ur reply earlier, ok. Still though try reading it past 200+ chaps that's when the real story starts, the first chaps below 199 are there so he can have connections with people from different status(Such as a gang leader that acts evil, but is actually trying to nurture a monster so he can protect something... And a person that acts like he wants to revolt every 20 years, but is actually trying to cover up hidden info). There's a lot.
RandomIsGood
RandomIsGoodLv5RandomIsGood

200+chaptpers what's wrong with you how can you even say that like if you say 25 I would understand but no 200 wow

Sakusei:Oh u mean ur reply earlier, ok. Still though try reading it past 200+ chaps that's when the real story starts, the first chaps below 199 are there so he can have connections with people from different status(Such as a gang leader that acts evil, but is actually trying to nurture a monster so he can protect something... And a person that acts like he wants to revolt every 20 years, but is actually trying to cover up hidden info). There's a lot.
Sakusei
SakuseiLv4Sakusei

Oh I probably forgot to say the really slow character development and world building

RandomIsGood:200+chaptpers what's wrong with you how can you even say that like if you say 25 I would understand but no 200 wow
Sakusei
SakuseiLv4Sakusei

And plot continuation

Sakusei
SakuseiLv4Sakusei

Most of the chaps under 200 are nothing but preparations for the real plot

RandomIsGood
RandomIsGoodLv5RandomIsGood

Just stop I ain't reading this ok

Sakusei:Most of the chaps under 200 are nothing but preparations for the real plot