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Review Detail of Azunyan in I Don't Want To Defy The Heavens

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Azunyan
AzunyanLv64yrAzunyan

The Chinese characters aren't even gone right now. When the translation gets fixed, then I'll give an actual review in the comments. But until the novels gets fixed, I have no positives for this.

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I Don't Want To Defy The Heavens

Xin Feng

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Azunyan
AzunyanLv6Azunyan

So the chinese characters are gone now. Maybe reading just the three chapter isn't good enough, but there were multiple warning signs for me. If there wasn't that many warning signs, I might have read more. 1. The first warning sign for me was the absence of a mother. For whatever reason, whenever a character is missing a parent, it is almost always a set up for someone that caused them to be missing. 2. The set up for the rescue. The servant helping MC is implicated and about to be executed when the MC steps in to help the servant. We literally met the servant just a couple lines ago and quite frankly, a cat would have more personality than that servant. 3, Plot holes. Logic from the story dictates that the MC transmigrated into the body of the young master. That young master most likely starved to death or could have, but the supposedly loving father didn't care at all. 4. This one is personal for me. The MC is stated to be a righteous dude. The actions that he takes such as saving the servant are not righteous. THEY ARE COMMON SENSE!! Stop making the MC seem better than he actually is!!! Anyways this is still a 1/5.

Rlopdsr12
Rlopdsr12Lv1Rlopdsr12

i found a novel named Wasurerarenai bōken and theres also Story Of Legends those books are great

Virility
VirilityLv14Virility

None of those first three things have happened thus far. I’ll admit I thought the beginning of the novel was sketchy but it turned out to be pretty funny and the current story is still rather nice imo. As for the mc being righteous I think the author only messed with that at the start as well. Keep in mind that comedy is one of the main things in this story and to me it seems like most good comedy stories with an actual plot seem to start pretty bad.