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SuperGuruLv64yr
2020-04-30 17:18

The mc is too linear. They made him stingy and that is his only defining trait, after 150 chp he still has no character development, and is just a douche. He doesn’t value any relationship at all and treats his own companions and people in general horribly. 150+ chapters and little story not world development. No idea on the hierarchy structure/world background and nothing on cultivation ranks.

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Sakusei
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I think it's around after 200 hundred chaps before they talk about the Power Structure, the story will also progress there. The first 100+ chaps are probably there to strengthen the MC to catch up with people on the same age as him(Which are usually people in the Martial Path Realm). The power structure is like this: Martial Path Realm: Has twelve realms Master Realm: Three levels which are... Initial Middle Peak Grandmaster Realm: Same as master realm God Essence Realm/God Body: Three Levels just like master Void Realm/Void Body: Three levels just like master realm Five-Elements Realm/Idk body (Haven't reached the part when he leveled it up): Three levels just like master realm Idk what's next I'm currently around chapter 280+ so Idk

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