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Flaashii
FlaashiiLv134yrFlaashii

I like your novel and how he is getting stronger but it is too slow like really slow 31 chapters in and he is still a kid this would not be a problem if you had more than 100 chapters but well if you can update faster and make more chapters it would get more readers and you don't really need to care about how op you make him well I like op characters you just need to make it interesting enough and not too fast-paced or slow-paced. You need to work a little bit at the structure of how your characters talk I am not a writer but I read a lot and a good novel does not need to have a name in front of the talking for the reader to know who is talking just a " . So I hope you update more and do not drop it like other writers.

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Ninja_Baiano
Ninja_BaianoLv4Ninja_Baiano

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Brian_Fisher
Brian_FisherLv3Brian_Fisher

Obviously didn't read it

Flaashii
FlaashiiLv13Flaashii

dude at that time I read till chapter 31 like it shows at my comment at the top.

Brian_Fisher:Obviously didn't read it