Review Detail of SmilingSmiley in Akashic Records : Book of Life

Hi Author here shamelessly give myself 5 stars. I know that the grammars had a lot of mistakes here and there. If you found something wrong please kindly tell me, so I can learn to be better at writing. Please let me know if you have any though about the story. And if you like the story please vote and review the book so I can share more story with you.