Review Detail of ProfoundLazyness in Phoenix Phire

Item: Phoenix Phire
Rating: 4.2

Review detail

ProfoundLazynessLv24yrProfoundLazyness

7 Chapters in, and if the story's gonna go on like this I'm out. Mc's relationships feel way too forced, or maybe people in that world are just all that way? Original premise, not my cup of tea. MC too blunt. Feels like he wouldn't be able to keep any secrets and will just boldly expose all his information. Whatever I hate it, but it doesn't mean you will so here's the honest rating. Writing Quality 4.5/5 - Too many curse words for me, it just throws me off. Stability of Updates 5/5 - Dunno, just started it. Story Development 4.5/5 - Dunno. Character Design 5/5 - No cardboard or cookie cutter. Pretty original. World Background 2/5 - Just 7 chapters in, but I'm hating both the mmo and the real world. And the reasons mc is where he is. Whatever.

Phoenix Phire

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BotwaCazadorAuthorBotwaCazador

Thanks for taking the time to review.

4yr

ShadowdraculLv5Shadowdracul

We Need more people like you on this site, Despite not liking the novel after reading the 7 chapters you still gave it five stars and gave your honest opinion without cursing the story. Bravo Man, Keep it up. 👍

4yr

Felix_NerosLv12Felix_Neros

Hey random reviewer! Do you know wether or not Author deletes negative reviews? The book is not bad per se, but there are some grammar issues, little description, some paragraphs can be rather confusing etc. I’d expect a solid 4.3-4.4. This isn’t an accusation, but review deletion is not extremely uncommon either, unfortunately.

4yr