I don't know what to say .... how the hell we going to find who's npc and who's player the one star missing from world background you could have done better 2. you explain whats happening like if there is players or not etc why the hell there many missing things inside novel for example you could have for every character (player/npc) you could have made stats for them like (any name) gender npc or player health / mana etc. there is no need for skills .... just basic stats doesn't take 3 or 4 line to do to make easier to understand the plot story its OK etc summary or conclusion it will be 100% better if you put introduction like confused what's happening in novel I have maybe read 17 chapters (when you read its very confusing) other than that it very excellent as you cans see from other reviews
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LIKEor name/npc or player that it and it will be better
At that point of the game, it's fairly easy to tell between NPC and players. Players are human characters with Hero occupations. The blurred line between NPC and players is part of the plot however, it isn't my intent to make it confusing. Thanks for reading.
