Review Detail of Alshiera_Imara_18 in The World seems Realistic but Why do I have a Leveling System?

I think the story is nice though there are several places that the author could work on, but I respect the effort. The writing quality is excusable, but I would also like to see some improvements in consistency in certain areas. overall if it's just to relax, then this is a good story to read but nothing more. But hey, it could improve in the future.