Review Detail of anon88 in The World seems Realistic but Why do I have a Leveling System?

This is a review of the first seventeen chapters. The main character is a 17 year old high school girl named Shelia who lives with her mom. She loves computer games and wishes that she could gain a system in real life. One morning she wakes up only to find the “Leveling System” has installed itself onto her cellphone. Shelia’s reactions to her wish being granted are what you would expect from a high school student. Overall, the author has written a flowing narrative. The story is in the fantasy genre, but there is a realistic feeling to the setting. Shelia’s character acts and randomly jumps between thoughts like a normal teenager. Unfortunately, Shelia is the only three dimensional character in the story so far. The pacing of the story is slowed due to the high level of details. While the author has work hard to remove misspellings, there are still strangely worded sentences.