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Review Detail of Holly_Putvin in Mortal kombat 11.5

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Holly_Putvin
Holly_PutvinLv114yrHolly_Putvin

While there is a good start, this story has too many simple errors that broke immersion. Character names are misspelled, proper nouns (names of characters) are not capitalized, subject verb agreement errors, etc. Please please do not be discouraged by this, the idea has potential, just the execution is weak. Also considering researching the lore if you want the attention of die hard fans of Mortal Kombat.

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Mortal kombat 11.5

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