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This is a review of the first seventeen chapters. The main character, Jinhee, was run over by a truck right after finishing her final exams for her university degree. She is reborn into her freshman high school body. Her life prior to rebirth was filled with bullying from her immediate family and the death of her loving distant family members. She becomes the rare heroine who prioritizes keeping the people she loves alive over person vengeance. The story is unique in having a heroine who concentrates on increasing the love/friendships in her live over revenge. There are some disappointing aspects. Chapters tend to not connect with the previous one. This leads to sudden jumps in time and locations that seem to come out of nowhere. Additionally, the author puts in a lot of effort to describe a character, but then has the character act contrary to the former characterization. There are also a scattering of grammar errors.

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Reborn: The Unexpected Twist

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Thank you very much for your honest thoughts. I'll try my best to improve myself