Review Detail of RedGunner in Rebirth and Second Chances

The best part here is that the characters are three dimensional, Giving the characters an emotional background helps the reader to feel for them. One more positive is that, this story is a unique one....not a rip-off or an inspired story. I like how the author did good research on the backgrounds of mythology and also makes the reader feel that the author put his 100 percent. Let's come to negatives My first concern is on how the first 50 chapters have a lot of info dumps which makes some people feel like you are reading an encyclopedia of the world. You are supposed to slowly introduce the unknown things about the world to the reader, but the author puts everything he wants us to know at the starting which makes us feel stuffy. Another concern is that the author forgot about what Kel discusses at the start with his wife on system glitch and how they are involved, MC literally ignores about that topic about Kel's and his wife's involvement. Too much and too long system prompts to my liking. Last concern is regarding the pacing of the plot, it is too uneven......sometimes the story is too fast and sometimes it's dead slow. These are my concerns but overall it's worth a read for its unique setting and good writing quality. I hope the author corrects the negatives. Keep up the good work.