Review Detail of Safire_Soul in Haven Online

I’m not very good at reviews so I’m going to try and keep it short, I’ve not been reading this book long enough for it to update but my mother says it updates often which is good for me as I go though books like no body’s business, the writing quality is brilliant and I’m fairly sure I’ve not come across any spelling mistakes, the story development is perfect if you ask me as I’ve been enchanted by it and unable to put the book down and that leaves me with character design and wold back ground so firstly character design I have no complaints as they are designed well and everything I find out about them has me wanting to learn more which to me is a good thing and lastly but not least is world background it’s good as it is but I’d recommend adding a bit more detail to give it more atmosphere especially for the fights it’s a fantasy game add some dramatic background changes like you did for that dungeon. Overall I’ve really enjoyed your story so far so please keep up the brilliant work as I know I appreciate it and I’m fairly sure that the rest of your readers do to.