Review Detail of vijaybmohan in The Novel's Mob

Hey there fellow Indian here. I am quite the sucker with light novels having mob protagonist and I must say your novel has been quite entertaining so far. I would like to say there are some grammatical errors in your earlier chapters and I was happy to see your writing has improved with more chapters. I cannot comment on the story development and world building since it's early stages but reading arc 1 I have found it very refreshing and interesting. About the mob protagonist though I would like to see him a bit assertive at least. I don't know why you gave him extra charm because he could have hid perfectly with average statistics and used it for intelligent or something. Him having that charm and acting all clumsy to stay out of trouble is making look him like a coward which is a bit annoying. I hope his intentions aren't misunderstood and cause ridiculous circumstances in the future because I remember this novel called "The Novels extra" which got me into this genre get spoiled due to crazy misunderstandings. Overall your work has been very good so far and I sincerely hope you won't drop this novel. All the best for future chapters!!