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Started good became terrible/stupid. The kind of stupid you get when you force a plot point even when it’s shouldn’t happen based on the context of the story. Become strong enough to fight all might with just your body. Have biju leve chakra and affinities. can make jutsu and has the eyes of the sages mother. Has byakugan to see through walls and underground. Cry’s like a ***** when mother is kidnapped and waste month on living like he can’t do anything. Even though he’s in the top 5 strongest people on the planet Now his mother’s is being a experimental guine pig and suffering a fate worse than death. For some who said he love her and started crying when she was almost raped. He sure is quick to abandon her to become a hero. For some with two souls and should be jaded by life as a slave. This whole become a hero first and save your mother later plot point. Is just forced and contrived when you can break islands with your fist and can spam shadow clone to brute force search city’s in minutes. It’s like the authors wanted to inserts mc in ua and be a hero but went about in the worst way possible.
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Here we go again~ 1)What plot point has been forced? Are you talking about the kidnapped mother? Or MC going to U.A; both have been wither partially explained or fully explained if you read up to Chapter 19. MC is training while living with All Might as legal guardian so he can enter UA. He tried to search for his mother with Byakugan and shadow clone army, but since he's the only one with a chakra signature in the entire world, he has to manually confirm every person he sees so it's literally retarded to go about looking for her blindly in this fashion. Under his temporary stay with All Might he's training HARDER THAN EVER to get the abilities to search for her — to be blunt Sage Mode. Why was the mother kidnapped? All for One wants something from her bloodline. There you go, nothing's forced. 2)Just because he can obliterate the planet (this is hyperbole, at least for now) it doesn't mean he has any tracking abilities. And he never cried for a month without doing anything? You're just making things up.... 3) I don't know where people get that he's abandoned her to become a hero when it's so obvious he's training under the guise to be a hero in search of her. 4) Neither you nor anyone thus far knows what experimentation or whatever she going through as I've only written the conclusion the MC and All Might came to after discussing the kind of person All for One is. For all anyone knows, she might not have even been kidnapped by All for One. 5) "For some with two souls and should be jaded by life as a slave. This whole become a hero first and save your mother later plot point. Is just forced and contrived when you can break islands with your fist and can spam shadow clone to brute force search city’s in minutes." Ok... here's why this won't work. One, I already said he tried it on a smaller scale and failed. Two, Assuming he went all out and summoned like 1,000 shadow clones to search all of Japan, what do you think will happen when the clones dissipate? He's not invincible, so taking in all that information even at small increments would take years to process. Not to mention how morally bankrupt he would have to be as a character to just ignore the privacy of tens or even hundreds of millions of people. This is the conclusion I hoped people would come too after reading the story, but I guess I have to spell it out...
i love this novel but that 'plot' of the mother getting kidnapped is dumb as fu** there are two possible outcomes 1-even tough she is quirkless they extract some gene or some shi* to give a nomu the same abilities or all for one gets them 2-she is torutured or killed when the mc finds her so you can fuel his hatred or some shi*
Vermillion_Yormsky:Here we go again~ 1)What plot point has been forced? Are you talking about the kidnapped mother? Or MC going to U.A; both have been wither partially explained or fully explained if you read up to Chapter 19. MC is training while living with All Might as legal guardian so he can enter UA. He tried to search for his mother with Byakugan and shadow clone army, but since he's the only one with a chakra signature in the entire world, he has to manually confirm every person he sees so it's literally retarded to go about looking for her blindly in this fashion. Under his temporary stay with All Might he's training HARDER THAN EVER to get the abilities to search for her — to be blunt Sage Mode. Why was the mother kidnapped? All for One wants something from her bloodline. There you go, nothing's forced. 2)Just because he can obliterate the planet (this is hyperbole, at least for now) it doesn't mean he has any tracking abilities. And he never cried for a month without doing anything? You're just making things up.... 3) I don't know where people get that he's abandoned her to become a hero when it's so obvious he's training under the guise to be a hero in search of her. 4) Neither you nor anyone thus far knows what experimentation or whatever she going through as I've only written the conclusion the MC and All Might came to after discussing the kind of person All for One is. For all anyone knows, she might not have even been kidnapped by All for One. 5) "For some with two souls and should be jaded by life as a slave. This whole become a hero first and save your mother later plot point. Is just forced and contrived when you can break islands with your fist and can spam shadow clone to brute force search city’s in minutes." Ok... here's why this won't work. One, I already said he tried it on a smaller scale and failed. Two, Assuming he went all out and summoned like 1,000 shadow clones to search all of Japan, what do you think will happen when the clones dissipate? He's not invincible, so taking in all that information even at small increments would take years to process. Not to mention how morally bankrupt he would have to be as a character to just ignore the privacy of tens or even hundreds of millions of people. This is the conclusion I hoped people would come too after reading the story, but I guess I have to spell it out...
I would like to say that the thing that's being forced is the kidnapping plot and the bloodline thing because thinking about it normally, his family name came from his father right so the bloodline shouldn't be in his mother's family since she only has the family name and nothing else, ohh well let's say that she is from the same family or that whoever kidnapped her didn't know if she has the sakuraboshi bloodline or not And another thing concerning the family name isn't his family name know around the world so how come no one until chapter 9 mentioned anything about it like for example the other slaves or even his mother since she knows about quirks shouldn't she at least know something about the family name And shouldn't his father at least tell his wife about it before he died or something And speaking about the privacy of other people that you mentioned, are you being serious 😒 like for real its if someone kidnapped your mother wouldn't you around searching every corner of the world even if it means entering other people's homes which he doesn't even need to because of his eyes And as for using the shadow clone technique to search for his mother is a waste of time, I don't really think so because there's actually a use for it which is spreading the clones on multiple places and use the Summoning: Earth Style: Fanged Pursuit Jutsu to summon Kakashi's dogs to track his mother by smell if you don't know the technique you can Google it and you will find your answer That's why my friend I think that your story has many flaws in it
Vermillion_Yormsky:Here we go again~ 1)What plot point has been forced? Are you talking about the kidnapped mother? Or MC going to U.A; both have been wither partially explained or fully explained if you read up to Chapter 19. MC is training while living with All Might as legal guardian so he can enter UA. He tried to search for his mother with Byakugan and shadow clone army, but since he's the only one with a chakra signature in the entire world, he has to manually confirm every person he sees so it's literally retarded to go about looking for her blindly in this fashion. Under his temporary stay with All Might he's training HARDER THAN EVER to get the abilities to search for her — to be blunt Sage Mode. Why was the mother kidnapped? All for One wants something from her bloodline. There you go, nothing's forced. 2)Just because he can obliterate the planet (this is hyperbole, at least for now) it doesn't mean he has any tracking abilities. And he never cried for a month without doing anything? You're just making things up.... 3) I don't know where people get that he's abandoned her to become a hero when it's so obvious he's training under the guise to be a hero in search of her. 4) Neither you nor anyone thus far knows what experimentation or whatever she going through as I've only written the conclusion the MC and All Might came to after discussing the kind of person All for One is. For all anyone knows, she might not have even been kidnapped by All for One. 5) "For some with two souls and should be jaded by life as a slave. This whole become a hero first and save your mother later plot point. Is just forced and contrived when you can break islands with your fist and can spam shadow clone to brute force search city’s in minutes." Ok... here's why this won't work. One, I already said he tried it on a smaller scale and failed. Two, Assuming he went all out and summoned like 1,000 shadow clones to search all of Japan, what do you think will happen when the clones dissipate? He's not invincible, so taking in all that information even at small increments would take years to process. Not to mention how morally bankrupt he would have to be as a character to just ignore the privacy of tens or even hundreds of millions of people. This is the conclusion I hoped people would come too after reading the story, but I guess I have to spell it out...