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2019-08-30 17:27

I wanna recommend this to everyone. It has a potential of series/movie. Great plot and story concept. No grammar lapses Great word construction Excellent creativity Superb writing skills I like how strong, caring, and at the same time mature of a woman Andy is. It made me more and more curious of how her story will be like as the story progresses. Keep it up, author! I'll support you even just reading a few chapters of your story and this is on my library already. 👍👍

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Thanks for that detailed review! I appreciate it. Best of luck to us both!

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