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DollShururu
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So much spam reviews, i'm having doubts whether this is really good or not. The story was written in the most Undetailed as possible, it has a complete lack of descriptions. The descriptions were basically.. for example; town would be called "Starting town" no descriptions added. The edge of the floor is called "end of 1st floor" no descriptions added. "forest" is just forest. Author never bothered explaining how actions or scenarios looks like. "Green plant monsters" "Boar monster" "Wolf monster" everything was described in the most boring possible. Rather than just saying "the wolf attacked" why not say describe their colours or at least how they attacked like; "the wolf lunge, attacking with it's sharp claws" or something. The writing is like author expected all readers to memorized the whole series.

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