I read the published version of this at home since you showed me years ago. It is a good story, however, it was short for me and I know you would do better in this story if you made it longer. Considering that this is fantasy, it is amazing you made it so short but it would be more awesome if you made a lot of chapters for this. But I understand since the contest where you joined this in was short stories only. I hope you would make this into a novel soon? What do you think?
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