Review Detail of Linodo in When the Lilyflower Blooms...
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Hi there! Linodo here. I’m just trying out a new story while I continue to write my main series, Spirit Immortal. The releases for this story would be a little less regular, by that I mean, there will be no schedule for this series. So yeah, nothing much to say here. Enjoy~
When the Lilyflower Blooms...
Linodo
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Author just please don’t give up on this novel Just today I finish reading this novel latest release It just few mistake here and there No major problem If the story quality doesn’t go down then this would definitely be in my top novel story I don’t understand why there is so few reviews This novel is definitely GOOD
This novel is indeed good Few ideas u can try if u want to 1. Add more backgrounds toward the side characters definitely MC friends 2. Add POV of other characters 3. More descriptions toward the world 4. Be careful with the number, many people would complain if the number doesn’t add on. U can make the overall number more vague like if the correct is 1437 then u can write over 1000 or about 1500 something like that 5. I feel there are still something miss in the novel 6. Just a suggestion write down ur idea and summary for each chapter so u don’t forget about where to go and what not to add in