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Sean1234
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IDK, author starts with some gruesome betrayal but the guy functions like its sunshine and rainbows and just starts having more kids with more wives?!? He is basically an old man and makes dumb decisions left and right?!? And personal opinion, ****ty systems that exist to put the MC is ****ty situations just feels forced instead of an actual story. I mean this is good if you want to pass some time but the story development is rushed with important character building aspects to make room for the MC being treated like trash for no reason? This could be good but the themes between a dark MC that is capable and fights the good fight and just a dude being pulled along by some by a bratty system is not set and needs a bit more work.

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If I'm not wrong you are spamming! Since when did I made the book into a harem? And what's with the old dude concept? Jian character is a middle aged man while his reincarnation is a six years old boy and you expect a boy of 6 years to have harem? At least re-review or remove your spam, it's not a good thing to write a spam review, my reader. It won't take me a second to remove your review but since you spared time to write one, don't discourage this poor author with your personal attacks! It's not cool!