I have a note I want to say to my fellow friends and readers, this novel it seems to focus more on a tag called child protoganist, the past life, as Jian lin in Mark White body at second life, introduction of system tough appears to be cliche, but has more to it, the explanation of new features, world background, his research could not be tossed aside. The authors makes few grammar mistakes I had difficulties at first chapters, but ain't the cases on the preceded ones, now at chapter 30 his grammar got too better than before, I can understand what he was trying to narrate, yes each author has his own style of narrating which gets prominent later, it takes time, maybe his first novel, but well a good novel, go for it. I hope author can make 300+ chapters, keep updating, we readers will read it for ya.
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