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YellowNarwhale
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First of all.... Second of all.... Third of all.... Ok......................................... Why is the prologue so long? This is my honest criticism. Take it with a grain of salt. Thanks author, I will read the book. Ok I give up, I still can’t post my review after 285 words..... Now I can??!!!!................... not yet. Oh. I forget to rate.

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The Madec Legacy

Basso2142

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Basso2142
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That's direct and constructive feedback, and I will take it into consideration when going over the already published chapters. The "arrival" chapters used to be three beasts of ~2,2k words each lol. I trimmed it down quite bluntly, and it detracted from their quality, I already have plans of rewriting them in the future. There is a reason for the things I kept, though. Some things stated in the prologue may seem useless, but they are there to set a precedent for a few things that will happen in the future. Without them, some future events will feel abrupt and downright a deus ex machina, but I will try to smooth things out. Thank you for taking the time to review my novel!!! It means a lot to new authors!

Ric_Lim
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Anybody knows what happened to the updates?