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The writing quality for this work is far better than the average author we have on webnovel. The story flows smoothly with no big grammatical mistakes or anything of that sort - which let me tell you is a very big plus in my book. (I hate when the story has its tenses or pronouns all mixed up) So, good job on that author! Next, the story development is a bit slow at the moment but since the work is still in the early stages, I don't mind that. Moreover, it's better to get the background details out of the way in the beginning so that you don't end up having into dumps as the story moves along (this is my personal opinion though most authors don't seem to agree with that. *meh*) The character design seems a bit mystifying which makes a reader eager to know what will happen next. All in all, this story is worth a read on an idyllic day ๐๐
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Thank you for the honest review! I do have to agree with you about the background details. It somewhat makes the story development. However, I donโt want to suddenly add info in the middle of the scene. Thanks for also pointing out my grammar! Once again, thanks for reviewing this novel. I hope you continue to read this book as more chapters are posted. :)
You stalking me Zenith? I thought it was agreed that I would be the one to stalk you ๐๐ And you better take a medicine for that cough that you seem to be experiencing. ๐ Since your place of residence will become extremely polluted after this festival season is over ๐๐๐
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Heh. I don't stalk. You were "found". Such a quick reply, I guess you are bored ......again. *smirk*
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Heh. I don't stalk. You were "found". Such a quick reply, I guess you are bored ......again. *smirk*
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_Transcendent:Heh. I don't stalk. You were "found". Such a quick reply, I guess you are bored ......again. *smirk*