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Rating: 3.6

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TheLazyRabbitLv44yrTheLazyRabbit

I'm gonna be frank. I was distracted by the mini emojis of the novel. I did not focus on reading and just focused on thinking what emoji it is. I hope you remove those if you like but so far, the story is good.

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ggone_

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ggone_Authorggone_

Thanks for your review! Another reviewer had mentioned this as well and i’m keeping it in mind to tone it down. The emojis are part of the story in expressing the characters’ thoughts. But i understand where you’re coming from since it might be too distracting and takes away the attention from the other details of the story. Thank you for the review once again!

4yr

TheLazyRabbitLv4TheLazyRabbit

If you could insert a real emoji with the expression there, maybe it can help rather than a long emoji made of punctuations

ggone_:Thanks for your review! Another reviewer had mentioned this as well and i’m keeping it in mind to tone it down. The emojis are part of the story in expressing the characters’ thoughts. But i understand where you’re coming from since it might be too distracting and takes away the attention from the other details of the story. Thank you for the review once again!

4yr