Review Detail of Kenjinn in Laksil

Well, Self review time to kick off a score at least. not a professional writer, If i'm not updating that means i'm reading or working. now what can i say, i wanted to write a novel from the perspective of a higher being or at least someone who was given the power and opportunity to try and create life and what kind of world would that person make. I have the plot the characters and the theme down, now i need to work on my writing ability and grammar. If you read it and like it, please leave some feed back. thanks