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pickley_poo
pickley_pooLv24yrpickley_poo

I binge-read until the latest chapter... So here is the review. Writing quality is a bit lacking especially in the beginning chapter. The author really needs to check the spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Some misused words, but overall understandable. I just started writing too and found Grammarly really useful. It's a free tool to improve writing, at least useful for spelling and simple grammar. I installed it both on pc and my phone. Very convenient. Full point on the stability of update. I'm glad about the number of chapters I've read so far. Character and plot development. I like the ML more than the FL. However, Lady Chen was really annoying especially in the beginning of the chapter. She is really a nonsensical woman I think. The plot would progress more fluently and nicely if the amount of detail is toned down. But, but, but! I enjoy the journey of both our MCs to understand themselves and their partner. Plus, the up and down in their marriage life. Good job author! The world background is clearly stated - China. Overall, the story is a good read if you don't mind the errors and the annoying Lady Chen. 🤭 Thank you author for the good story and keep up with the good work!

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Unpredictable Marriage.

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Paschalinelily
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Thank you, I appreciate your review and the tips.

vibhasharma2287
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is there any misunderstandings leading to partition...living away from each other..single parenting...the common cliche?