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Avalorian_
Avalorian_Author5yr
2020-03-30 18:04

Ahem... me again. With one of those, uhm, shameless reviews. I'll use it to give a few pointers on what to expect. Female lead: Wicked and scheming at first, definitely the kind of person you will easily hate. Read to find out what she will be like in future. System: Not OP Male lead: Way different from Lu Aotian of MBL and Ji Xiehan of TOCW Release rate: Currently 3-10 chapters a week, will increase with time Got any questions? Feel free to askπŸ˜‰

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Ian_Nathaniel_0908
Ian_Nathaniel_0908Lv4

when will the chapters countinue

Avalorian_
Avalorian_Author

Hey, I'm currently writing the next chapter. I will update it in the next few hours πŸ™‚

Ian_Nathaniel_0908:when will the chapters countinue
Ian_Nathaniel_0908
Ian_Nathaniel_0908Lv4

still waiting

Avalorian_
Avalorian_Author

Sorry, I was so distracted that I couldn't finish the chapter. I posted one now ❀

Ian_Nathaniel_0908:still waiting
Ian_Nathaniel_0908
Ian_Nathaniel_0908Lv4

the chapter is great problem is that i will wait for another one week so as to read the next chapter

Avalorian_:Sorry, I was so distracted that I couldn't finish the chapter. I posted one now ❀
Avalorian_
Avalorian_Author

I'm so sorry for the wait.πŸ˜” Currently, I have more things to do hence less time to write and that's why I don't update so often. But when I'm less busy, I will start updating daily. I hope you understand. ❀

Ian_Nathaniel_0908:the chapter is great problem is that i will wait for another one week so as to read the next chapter
storyclaimssecret
storyclaimssecretLv10

How many chapter will this novel has?

Nick_Stratton
Nick_StrattonLv5

Ya

Villainess_is_here
Villainess_is_hereLv3

What is OP author-san?

Avalorian_
Avalorian_Author

Overpowered. What I meant is that the system is not will not control each of the female lead's actions as rhough she is a child following instructions. I hope it's clearer now

Villainess_is_here:What is OP author-san?
Avalorian_
Avalorian_Author

Overpowered. What I meant is that the system is not will not control each of the female lead's actions as rhough she is a child following instructions. I hope it's clearer now

Villainess_is_here:What is OP author-san?
Nelly_Henry_3924
Nelly_Henry_3924Lv2

Pls ur discord name and tag

Avalorian_
Avalorian_Author

Uhm... type the following link onto your browser to join my server: tinyurl.com/Avalorian You can dm me at any time!

Nelly_Henry_3924:Pls ur discord name and tag
mango_blossom
mango_blossomLv4

what is op?

Avalorian_
Avalorian_Author

Overpowered. What I meant is that the system in this book is not the type that will control the FL's actions and she will still be independent despite having it.

mango_blossom:what is op?
Sherrion_mana
Sherrion_manaLv11

Good luck author-nim I do prefer to binge reading, finishing all the chapters in less then a week. i hope you stay healthy and motivated so you can finish the book. can't wait!! i'm intrigued with the summary. always like it when the FL is badass and can take care of herself. wish you the best!! πŸ‘

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